II. Greed
Seven Stories of SinII. GreedOh, Midas, starved by having much,You who prayed for golden touch! Greed who made your stomach itch,Punished you for being rich. You had enough; your life was blessed,And...
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Sam, I like this much better than the first one.I think you could possibly add another quatrain and have a lovely sonnet, but if you can't pad this without it sounding padded, leave it as it is.I...
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Margaret, I'd love to read your Midas sonnet... and discuss some ideas with you, if you don't mind...My email address is hinklesw@interlochen.orgI made your changes-- they were good. I don't feel that...
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